White Socks Only is a stunning piece of literature and art, a charming book about a curious child eager to find out whether something she’s heard is true. I revisited this book purely for the purpose of teaching it, and there’s just so much to explore! Of course, the obvious choices would be to visit the themes of racism and segregation. But as a creative writing trainer, there’s much more.
The book opens with the young narrator wanting a story, and not just any story, her favourite story. And she knows just how to get her grandma to tell that story – by asking if she may go to town alone. She knows what the response will be – she may not go until she can do some good there. But she also knows that this will lead to the story of the time her grandmother sneaked out, went to town–and unwittingly did some good there.
Without revealing why her grandmother went to town and what happened there, I can only say that it’s a beautiful story that always makes me smile. Whether I’m teaching diction, word choice, figures of speech or grammar, it’s the perfect story to read. With adults or children, with young writers or a book club … yes, I’ll say it again. It’s perfect. Here’s what we explored during my writing programme this time.
Structure and Narrative Voice
White Socks Only is a story within a story, and both stories are first person narratives. It is ideal to teach the advantages of using the first person narrator. Importantly, I like to teach the idea of making a conscious choice while choosing whose voice to use to tell a story. What would a shift in perspective involve?
I often also tell children about how I wrote Sisters at New Dawn in third person before realising that telling the story from Kannagi’s perspective would work much better. Yes, it’s a middle-grade book, over 30,000 words long. Even so, rewriting it was well worth it because it fit so much better with what I wanted to do with the story.
Dramatic Irony
During this edition of my creative writing programme, I introduced the idea of dramatic irony. Once more, I realised that an activity that works brilliantly with one group of children can fail miserably with another–that’s what happened with my dramatic irony activity! The good part, however, was that I found a video to help me explain the idea better. Then, during the story writing module, we read White Socks Only. And the children were able to identify dramatic irony perfectly in the story, even commenting on how the narrative voice makes dramatic irony possible!
Word Choice
When we introduce concepts like ‘show, don’t tell’, we need to keep coming back to each word we write. In White Socks Only, we have words like ‘hobbled’ and ‘slinking’. What do these synonyms for the word ‘walk’ tell us about the character and context?
White Socks Only is just one of many resources on the wonderful Storyline Online, which is what makes it particularly easy to use in class!
| Title | White Socks Only |
| Author | Evelyn Coleman |
| Tags | Picture Book, Teaching Resources |
| Rating (out of 5) | 5 |
| Age-group | 9+ |
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